Pretty average honestly. Could have been better with a bit more things. Just off the top of my head:
1. More spanks with the paddle
2. Using both nipple clamps instead of just 1
3. Keeping the clamps on for the rest of the video
4. Pouring the wax on her tits instead of just her fucking arm, like come on?
5. Quick test of the vibrator on camera, ofc keeping the action out of frame but just see the reaction
Will say the cut off her coming back saying the vibrator was good was kinda fun, imagining her going off to cum and test it out.